The drums are very heavy, especially the kick. I don’t think the kick needed quite as much sub-bass. The gritty mid-range bass at :06 is pretty groovy, though, and I like the sense of climax into :32. The melody that comes in there is cool, but I think the instrument you used for it sounded a little thin and generic. Part of the problem could be that it’ll blend into the texture better with more reverb. The drop at 1:00 was catchy, if a little minimalistic. Overall, I think you miss out on opportunities to use the higher frequency range a lot in this piece. It also gets pretty repetitive after a while. You also overuse some of the transitions by the end, like the snare spam at 3:32. Overall, it’s a well-structured and smooth-flowing piece. I think you could’ve put a lot more effort into the composition, though. Keep at it, UnavailableSurm. :)
Thanks so much!!
Sounds are good, but the melody's pretty reptetive and the mix is a bit empty. Good luck in the NGUAC
I realize, thank you!
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