I like the new rythym sense in this one. It's a nice track. On this one 2:20sounds awkward but, the melodies actually had something to do with one another, overall I say nice work!
Personally, this didn't turn out as well as I hoped. Mostly because toward the beginning, when I added the second pattern of notes that starts at 0:13 in Waterflame's original, I didn't really alter the sound on the second, so the two patterns blended, and not for the better.
As for 2:20, that transition could have been done better. In the original, that transition was faster, and mostly kept the same tune. But, I wanted to make it my own, and unfortunately, I didn't have the best results.
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