This is just my opinion, so don't take it seriously, but I think guitars at the beginning are just too loud, they just made me jump and distracted from the music itself, and the ambient-like part between 02:00 and 03:00 is too long, it breaks the song into disconnected parts. The part after 03:00 was great, and the whole track is okay.
Thanks, i know and it's just a "demo", i will try fix some parts for better quality and work, thanks for your review :3
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