I don't really know why, but it didn't touch me. Sounded... too repetitive maybe? Maybe it would be better either lighter or darker/heavier? I don't know. Ahhh, it's so hard to explain your thoughts when you aren't familiar with technical side of composing.
It is based off a musical form called Ostinato, which is a repeated musical phrase and/or rhythm. So the repetitive-ness is a part of the formula. I understand where you're coming from, thanks for the constructive criticism!
Good job, It really gave me the vibe of 16bit games
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