This isn't all that bad, to be honest. It's definitely better than your previous one and the notes were in the right key for the most part. I don't think, however, that using a repeated kick drum in place of a sub-bass is a good idea because it doesn't really work all that well. Overall, not bad. It definitely fits the title. :)
That's good to hear. I actually played this to my friend IRL, and he said it was pretty good as well (he's generally a harsh critic). As for the kick drum bassline: I agree. That was stupid of me. It sounds okay without headphones, but with headphones it just sounds obnoxious. Glad you enjoyed!
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