Mixing is fair to good, but I feel the autotune is a bit much. Hi-hats sound cheesy and overly synthy, as well as do the straight beats on bass and guitar. Chords are good. Overall, the song itself is short and not perfect, but I enjoyed the listen.
There's no one who can give me technical advice, so your advice is very helpful.
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