Honestly I have a REALLY hard time giving this criticism this is amazing...
I guess I could say two things though:
-It seems a little quiet, try making it a little louder...
-I didn't hear a drop and if there were a drop then it didn't really work what I can suggest is taking the main melody and putting it into a different instrument with drums that have a kick every 2 bars and a snare every two bars to the bar next to the kick and then adding hi hats in the second part of the drop.
But overall pretty good.
Thank you for the kind compliment!
I can easily adjust the volumes that would be no problem, the drop was more subtle with a deeper bass that could probably be boosted a little. What you described seems more of a House beat/style which I can definitely try as it might not hurt.
If I get the chance this weekend I'll work on and put up a new version!
Thank you for the review, I really appreciate it! :)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.