More details in the script like where she's speaking or what she was/is wearing either when the other person slipped their hand through her panties or the color or compare how it felt to something else. Nice whispers,I like the breaths you take when you talk like 00:08 and 0:16. Sounds kinda like a pornstar, which is a double edged sword since it's kinda exaggerated and feels a bit fake, but it's still great voice acting. Literally could picture me laying in bed with a girl resting sideways on my chest rubbing it,cuddling, and whispering in my ear. Great work.