Better than the other 2 by far. the beginning is not that bad. buildup is cool. drop is worse than most of your drops though maybe improve on the drop more now on your songs?
The tune is good, but you could've improved on the instruments used. Especially since I can't hear the chorus.
Yeah, I Know. :P
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