Alright so I picked random audio and I got you! What are the odds?! :D Let's see here.

I think the note rhythm sounds a little bit weird. It seems to alternate between legato and staccato, which I just find odd.

The notes seem a little bit out of harmony, so I'm not a big fan of that.

The song is very repetitive; it repeats the same sequence over and over again several times, but at different volumes with different instruments each time. It's not great.

I think there could be more instruments. Having more instruments would make the audio sound so much better.

Overall, I think this song could use some work. But it has potential. :)