This is fucking well done. Everything is perfect. What more can I say, this is just amazing!
Mmmh, nice idea
ehm, where is the bass? It needs someone *rolleyes* And the mainsynth sounds acute. Hmm, only a little, I think. Work more on it, please! It could become better, if you want ;)
The bass was the "second synth", but I see where you're going with that. I do need to change it. :)
Good song, but could be improved.
It starts out with a bit of an annoying synth, but as soon as you bring in your pads (which are awesome!!) and your percussion, it gets better. You build things up quite nicely in the following section, but unfortunately you don't add too much to justify it. Also, the part right after the buildup is very short... it feels like 2/3 of your song is the part before the buildup, and only a bit of it is the actual part of the melody... sounds like you could work on this a bit more and actually finish it.
On what you were trying to get it to sound like, it definitely sounds like a Peaceful Trance piece... but a Dance Party? Not so much. Keep trying.
Overall? It's a decent song but could use work. I'd vote 4, but I don't want to bring down your perfect score. I'll vote 5 instead. =) Judging by the time you've been making songs for, I'm sure you can make better... so keep making songs! ;)
I hope my advice has helped... any chance you could drop on by my audio page sometime at http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1828837 and maybe review either of my latest two songs? I would definitely appreciate it.
Thanks for the review!
The synth was supposed to be better, btu the one I found was too glitchy, so I went with this one. The pads was accually 2 different instruments (Sytrus' Male Choir & Vanguard's PAD SuperWarm MS). As it says in the title, this is only a demo. I'm going to fix that buildup bit so it doesn't feel that long.
The Dance Party Collection was just a collection of various dance & trance pieces.
Thanks for the encouragement!
I'll check out your stuff soon!
-Vinny (DJ DaVinster)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.