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Vacuum Cleaner


Author Comments

i named this vacuum cleaner because my gf was talking about a vacuum cleaner


This is what i like! It gives me a very chilly feeling .. Lay back. Keep going bruh, love it haha

I thought you named it vacuum cleaner because it sucks :-P (that's mean, I know, but it's funny, come on!)

:/ is the best way I can describe my reaction to this whole piece. It has some potential compositionally, and the drums are by far it's best redeeming attribute...the lead is sorta bouncy, sorta funky, I can dig it. However, there are serious shortcomings with the sound of everything. It kinda feels like an old Casio toy keyboard is playing it back to me. I really don't like the sound choices for the lead, and the distortion on it at 1:55 really doesn't help matters at all. The backing chords are nice, that's a nice BG organ with a subtle leslie effect in it...that was a decent choice, but that lead man...that's got to be clearer and more attention grabbing, in my opinion. I'd try it with a wurlitzer, then maybe couple it with a crystal synth to kinda get that rhodes feel but sorta not...I think it'll be a nicer way to feel different than what you're doing...give it a shot!

Kalviter responds:

You wound me! I'm joking, that's a decent pun, well done.

When you say that there's serious shortcomings with the sound of everything, could you elaborate a bit more? Is it mixed weirdly/badly? I get that the lead could have a better sound (Especially the distorted one) but how much of the mix do you expect it to take up?

Thanks for taking the time to review this, but I'm kinda left with more questions than answers. Hopefully you can take the time to clarify a little.


Kalviter responds:

Glad you like it!

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Credits & Info


2.83 / 5.00

May 2, 2017
5:48 PM EDT
File Info
8.6 MB
3 min 47 sec

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