ELEMENT - Mastered Version

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May 1, 2017 | 7:31 AM EDT
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6 MB
4 min 21 sec
4.77 / 5.00

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Rated 4.77 / 5 stars
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From my upcoming album, Square Eyes.
My latest! Hope you like, I certainly enjoyed making it. Tell me what you think please, I'm still a developing artist!

Earlier today, I posted something for some art. If you are an artist, please PM me if you can do this:
red or light blue fox's head facing the front, only the head, all in different lines, instead of one big drawing. Futuristic.

Please go and have a look round my Soundcloud, that would mean a lot to me, I really would like to see people on there.
Here it is:
This song:
My Soundcloud

Thanks for Listening!
Please go and check out my other songs!



Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Very nice! I'm amazed by your work at your age. Keep up the good work!

Squeegee4554 responds:

thank you!


Rated 5 / 5 stars

wow! (btw when i said my review was late on time and space i misread 2016 as 2017 XD) well anyways this is a pretty good song! i like the piano in the begining, and then the transfer to the synthesizer, its one of the only good transition of piano to synth i've really seen, most people make it sound kinda weird, lol. hope to see more awesome music!

Squeegee4554 responds:



Rated 5 / 5 stars

I really liked the melody, only one problem, isn't it a little repetitive?
otherwise, keep your amazing work and i wish you get better!

By the way, i just discovered you're 14, like me xD

Squeegee4554 responds:

Yeah! It is a bit repetitive.


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Please keep learning, writing and making music. I know I always refer back to your age, but you're doing damn amazing stuff for someone who's only 14.

Ignoring your age, this is pretty good. The chorus drop is a bit of an extreme change in level, so maybe bring up the level of the verse slightly (I had a very similar problem with a recent track and it's really hard to get that drastic dynamic difference right without a buttload of compression, which I don't always like). The mix is pretty decent, but there's a little bit of muddiness and lack of separation between the elements in the chorus. I think it'd also be good to add a new melody in the chorus, and vary the verses with little bits of interest here and there to prevent it from becoming monotonous.

Either way, I'm still really impressed by what you're doing. Just make sure you keep learning and getting better!!! Can't wait to see what kind of stuff you're making in five years.

Squeegee4554 responds:

Thanks! I only have one question, how do i get more people to hear my music?