You have a good sense of rhythm and harmony. The instruments here struck me as a little generic, though, and I wasn’t a huge fan of the panning in the drums - it was a very hard pan that didn’t add much to the piece IMO. Also, once the bass comes in at :16, the kick and drums get a little distorted. I think you need some more careful equalizing, and probably some compression too. As for the composition, I would’ve liked to see you vary that main lead riff (comes in at 2:22 and many other places) more. The piece gets quite repetitive after a while, and also doesn’t have much in the way of dynamic contrast or phrasing - just a near-constant energy level for over 4 minutes. The melodic content here is really enjoyable, though. I think my main problem with the piece is the mixing - it just sounds really strained during the busy sections. Excessive reverb might be part of the problem, but I think you really need to look into using an equalizer to limit the distortion here. As a priority, I’d suggest eliminating all of the low frequencies in every instrument except the bass and kick. Doing so will make the sound quality much clearer. Solid work on the composition, though. Keep at it, Nicfart646. ;)
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