The demo 'feature' ruins any potential enjoyment
I'm gonna assume the 'AVS media demo' is a 'feature' of the demo version of the program. Try and maybe use another program or maybe up the volume of everything else.
It sounds like you've got a chilled bass and some nice beats, but the voice just doesn't let me enjoy it.
I did notice that later on, it sounds like you break the tempo a bit. Sounds a bit odd.
Anyway, like I say, it's really hard to listen to anything you make with this voice over the top.