like the message but face it, there's better music
The drum beat basically doesn't change, and neither does the bass melody.
The vocals are inaudible, dissonant and ambient but ironically add to the overal song, which isn't a good thing. However, it's not so bad that I stopped it from looping while I typed this out. So well done.
I believe there is no god because if there isn't a god, you shouldn't believe that there is! What warped interpretations of reality can arise from the looseness of one's mind to adapt to baseless explainations? You give ONE logical reason to show that god exists which doesn't embody the sentence "god exists because god exists." and that includes using "love, miracles and sacrifice" as excuses for "otherwise" unexplainable phenomena.
Here are the facts. Time, space, matter, statistics, gravity, love, death, pain.
You are otherwise stupid enough to believe someone as ugly as you runs the universe.
BEST SONG EVER!!! I SAVED IT ON MY IPOD AND I USE IT TO CONVERT PEOPLE BY SHOWING THEM HOW GREAT BEING AN ATHEIST CAN BE.
Humanism or atheism is a wonderful philosophy of life as long as you are big, strong, and between the ages of eighteen and thirty-five. But watch out if you are in a lifeboat and there are others who are younger, bigger, or smarter. --William Murray
Nobody talks so constantly about God as those who insist that there is no God. -- Heywood Broun
In some awful, strange, paradoxical way, atheists tend to take religion more seriously than the practitioners. --Jonathon Miller
It amazes me to find an intelligent person who fights against something which he does not at all believe exists. --Mohandas Gandhi
Atheists express their rage against God although in their view He does not exist. --C. S. Lewis
Still, even the most admirable of atheists is nothing more than a moral parasite, living his life based on borrowed ethics. This is why, when pressed, the atheist will often attempt to hide his lack of conviction in his own beliefs behind some poorly formulated utilitarianism, or argue that he acts out of altruistic self-interest. But this is only post-facto rationalization, not reason or rational behavior. -Vox Day
Atheism is a crutch for those who cannot bear the reality of God. -- Tom Stoppard
If atheism spread, it would become a religion as intolerable as the ancient ones. --Gustave le Bon
You think you are too intelligent to believe in God. I am not like you. --Napoleon Bonaparte
The worst moment for the atheist is when he is really thankful, and has nobody to thank.--Dante Gabriel Rossetti
If there were no God, there would be no atheists. --G.K. Chesterton
By night, an atheist half-believes in God. –Edward Young
Without God man has no reference point to define himself. 20th century philosophy manifests the chaos of man seeking to understand himself as a creature with dignity while having no reference point for that dignity. --R. C. Sproul
This is okay.
Personally, I would've brought your synth string up in volume and upped it an octave. It sounds like the lead melodic instrument sitting back in the mix where it doesn't belong. Bring it in the forefront. Also, you had a drum part come in that was louder than the previous. I would fix those levels to where they balance at the same volume.
Also, add a little more filler. This can be just a simple chord pad or even a distort guitar rhythm to keep it supported.
However, these are just my opinions. The piece itself is decently done. It's well composed; I just feel it could use some more work.
Yeah, I only spent a couple hours on it. The next song of mine will be better.
TY 4 the review.