Sorry, but none of it is actually really good. The intro is kinda good.
Here's a list of things.
1. Too much reverb on the drums.
2. The bass isn't bass, it's just an ear rape noise.
3. Try not to over do it on the Code Pandorum sample pack. Heard the same MG Sounds on your other track.
Try mixing a bit better as well. And try use some of your own bass sounds, or if you are. Try make them better by looking up tutorials. And maybe make some other sounds as well. And try to add some more stuff into it, like plucks, etc. And add sub bass to your basses...If that is a bass.
Sorry for a really rubbish review, but. Eh, kinda trying to help. I'm not the best helper.
1 Star for effort in making deathstep.
Thanks for Respond!
I'm sure that I will get better!