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Composition-wise, this is very nice, but the highs are completely drowning out all the bass frequencies. Also, some serious tuning issues on your guitars. It could be a consequence of downtuning, in which case I'd recommend heavier string gauges on the offending strings. Your intonation is suffering. Also not liking the chord structure on full bar chords. Leads to a lazy feeling and some notes are just dissonant.

Also, the reverb on that classical sounding snare needs taming. It sounds quite unnatural. In short, playing and composition, good. Mixing is really stealing the emotive power of this piece. Even got a bit of clipping here and there, unless my ears are tricking me.

NahuPyrope responds:

Thanks so much for the review!, my guitar... is actually broken, I can't intonate it at all, I have to change the floyd rose on it because of that problem, I'm using .74-.09, It's actually pretty impressive you noticed it!, I don't know about the clipping, I really took care of it.

I have to get a lot better at mixing tho!, or get someone that can mix for me, thanks so much again!

Awesome stuff, love the symphonic elements! Instant 5 and download, can't wait to hear more :D

NahuPyrope responds:

Thanks so much dude!, if you liked this maybe you'll like my Daybreak EP too!

I think this song just made me realise how much I have to learn as a musician.

NahuPyrope responds:

Thanks so much dude!, I don't know what actually made you realise but I'm happy it did!

love it, just love it
that main melody is damn good
epic track, keep up the good work :]

NahuPyrope responds:

Thanks a lot! ♥

Really nice work. It just seems like the mixing is off to me. The bass basically doesn't exist at all in this song, and it really needs to exist in a heavy metal song.

Also haha it sounds like a totally new song starts at 4:07. :P That transition needs a bit of work.

Still the riffing & soloing is really solid :)

NahuPyrope responds:

The bass is a synth too, and it's a really harsh one haha

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Uploaded
Apr 21, 2017
5:04 PM EDT
Genre
Heavy Metal
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12.8 MB
5 min 36 sec

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