i agree with Spikrodd this really is beautiful
It has a story... might I tell you it?
00:00 - The opening: curtain call.
00:03 - Beat drops, moan: a couple struggle in their relationship. the man sighs as the woman decides it's over between them.
00:09 - second moan: the man feels the pain of his loss. He debates on whether to take his life or not.
00:14-00:36 - jazz scream, bass jarring: Man is stopped by mysterious woman as he steps into traffic. looks like his past lover. flashbacks and such occur, in which the woman yells at him a second time to snap him out of it.
00:36 - Piano becomes more powerful: man spends time with woman, lives and loves. his past lover sees him and lets out a single tear. (00:47)
00:47-00:58 - Beat becomes more subtle: Woman tries to take her life, is stopped by a mysterious man.
00:58 - 'dance!': freeze frames of the two together, through many a year.
01:12 - Bass jarrs yet again: the two couples seperate, causing much turmoil.
01:18- pianos: the two remenisce of their past lives together long ago. try to leave it behind.
01:22 - continue bass: the two run out in the rain, trying to make things right only to run into eachother
01:33 - fade: they collide in the rain, wrap arms and kiss. the wrong has been fixed, fade camera out, turns to black.
Thats what i see. Its quite beautiful.
I dig it
This is a pretty cool song man. I'm digging those low bass tones. A bit of a genre mixer eh?
The drums were pretty good. The pattern was pretty good, but really kind of got repetitive. The bass was all good. Pretty simple but works. The piano was an interesting choice to add in. It gave it a lot of character and make it stand out from other similar dnb pieces.
Although the song seems to be rather empty. Just bass and drums. No sort of pad, or leads, except a piano, which was overshadowed by the bass.
I think you should take out the vox parts too. They are kind of annoying.
Well good stuff anyway man. Keep up the good work.
Perhaps some of the best DnB I've listened to in a good time. Really amazing stuff there! First of all, the overall sound quality is really nice. Nice piano! The vox takes a little getting used to, but it's really nice to listen to after you get used to it. Maybe vocode & FX the vox?
-The drum beat is a little repetitive, add some fills, variable to signify change of mood within the song.
-Fade out of a song is so over-rated unless your song is made up of more components. Find a ending that would put shock and awe into the audience!
-Check my audio!!!-
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.