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Apr 21, 2017 | 8:32 AM EDT
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4.6 MB
5 min 1 sec
3.59 / 5.00

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Rated 3.59 / 5 stars
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This track is an excerpt from the collaborative album between myself (Paragraphs) and Joey van der Kaaij
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Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

I like the dark mood at the beginning. The part at :18 hits hard. The distorted vocals at :36 are cool, and somewhat morbid. I love the intensity, although the piece is a little slow to develop. After around 1:30, I think you’ve overdone it a bit with the angry vocals. It seemed nice and climactic up to that point, and I was itching for some melodic content. At 2:35, you seem to switch up the beat a bit and try to take the piece in a different direction structurally, but I think the piece needs a little structural relief at this point. The vocals also cut off pretty suddenly at 4:12, as do the guitars at 4:31. I think you need to give this piece a little more shape. The experimental texture is really cool, but without any instrumental variety I don’t think it can function very well as a stand-alone piece. One thing I do like about the piece is that I can hear everything in the mix clearly throughout. There are a lot of neat ideas here, but I think the arrangement needs some cleaning up here. Keep at it, man!



Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

This shit's so fucking raw and visceral it would make Michael Gira proud. The distorted yelling, the addition of synths, so fucking perfect! Those guitar tones are ace, too.

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jambrother2 responds:

A fellow swans fan! I must admit, swans first two albums were a huge inspiration for this project.