I'm not really jiving with the instrumentation of this piece. Your writing is just fine, but the lack of humanization or even differed velocity between notes leaves this feeling very disinterested and bored, thus unable to represent the idea you're going for. That's not to say I didn't enjoy it, but each part is just laying there.
Thanks for your review. I will be careful with the instrumentation for future pieces.
The instruments act like they're on auto-pilot. Each one is following a relatively simple pattern and doing little to change that throughout the piece. The music sounds like it's bored with itself, and, unfortunately, I have to agree. I'm sorry, teodorattt. :(
Nah, don't be sorry. I really didn't put much effort in it.
I don't really like the piano in this. The notes aren't humanized, they sound the same volume and robotic, and it's too dry, needs some reverb. Though I like piano songs, this one sounds a bit empty. I like the melody, but mixing and effects and humanizing notes make such a difference. Keep working, melody isn't bad though.
Thanks for advice. I will try to make the songs more "human".
I liked the beginning of the track a lot. The second part felt a bit boging though. Anyway, good work!
Thank you very much!
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