I did enjoy the piece, but I can't possibly turn it up as loud as it needs to be for me to be able to hear each little intricacy you've got going. That's a compression issue, not a speaker problem, if you catch my drift. Everything you have going on here is all very relaxing, but at this volume level, everything is a bit buried by the drums. Although I very much enjoy them, it feels as if each new element introduced is over before it begins.
First mistake: You shouldn't have to tell people to turn their speakers up just because you didn't make the song loud enough. The pads in the background are a bit too quiet, as well as the overall volume of the song.
I love what you did with the drums, very soothing and creative, I like the glitchy effect, and well mixed, but the song has little substance as it's very repetitive. It only has a few real elements, but what IS here so far, isn't bad. I like the pads, that ambient atmosphere is beautiful but needs to be turned up more to take us in that environment more. I like the 8-bit synth at the end but you're introducing a new element as the song is about to end.
It left me wanting more without giving me much. This song has a lot of potential if you added more elements to it and made it longer and not so repetitive, the highlights are the drums and the pads. This makes me think of a more toned down style of Phyrnna, which is a compliment. Reminds me a little of her work but different.
I could say in a way this does fit the artwork, but it needs more melody, more volume, a couple more layers, it feels incomplete, but what you have so far besides that is great. Just needs more work.
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