It's unrefined.

It has a catchy beat to it, but I'm left wondering if there isn't more that can be done. Like it has to choose between energy or ambiance. The synthesized tune doesn't seem to mesh with the bell like tones that persevere and give it that gloomy but lively quality.

Now if you exchange that synthesizer sound for something more organic, then you would have an ambient piece that works to the degree of, say... Blade Runner. Swap the voice drop out for female chorus vocals or have him say something that fits the feel of the music.