No offence mate, Im; english. this track is very 'american' kinda grates me. the tunes all very nice, i like the tambourine. the drums themselves stand out as sampled from the rest of the track.
The vocal is well...acceptable. not good, not bad, it'll do. i think it's one of the main problems, it sounds like you aint letting go of the vocal, restraining it cos it's in a mic.
Its a generic track tbh, nice, ticks the right boxes, but doesn't really make any inroads. the productions is sound, nice touches with the double tracking and so on, it's missing that 'wow' factor though. its a 3/5 but cos im nice i give 4.
Some great playing, smooth, mellow, awesome mix of sounds. It sounds like a really commercial track if you ask me, I can definately see this on a cd.
I didn't quite understand the lyrics, and I mean that by I didn't quite hear them. Don't think thats your fault, I very heavily listen to instrumental pieces and so am not really accustomed to picking up words. I catch phrases and sentences here and there, so I get the basic picture.
In any case, a marvelous piece DjSpooty, work well done, easily a 5/5 from me! I'd like to invite you to check out my work sometime!