too slow for my liking, try increasing the beat.. voted 1.. sorry..
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Well No Diversity at all and no melody try slowing your tempo down and adding a bit more space between your samples instruments and shit and the snap try some kicks to. wouldnt hurt to put some vocals down to
but other than those major errors a pretty crappy submission Xd it and if you want beef for my brutaly honest review then grab a plate and get your fill ill make sure to bookmark your page cause imma beef type of guy ;) your free to judge my beats aswell be honest i love honesty and love diss tracks about me even more so do yo thang
so what u sayin,i got my fork and plate ready,if u want beef,e-mail me,or just lay low