Holy Hera, that was one of the funniest things I've ever heard.
The ooooos just get to me XD
Some of the synths were kinda cool, but most were cheesy (like your lyrics - NEVA GIVE UP! NO!), and your vocals weren't very good.
Something was slightly off in terms of time. I think some of it was the music, some of it the vocals.
You CAN make music, but it just sounded so damn amateur.
It's like masturbating with sandpaper.
Thoams: Masturbating with sandpaper? I don't remember doing that. r-17?
r-17: Not fot this song, Thoams.
Thoams: No, but seriously, we're glad you thought it was funny, we were definately shooting for humor here.
r-17: This particular tune was supposed to be something inspirational & from the 80s for the movie, and we think we got it. ;) Rock on!
I was not actually expecting such a high quality track like this here! I can definately expect to hear this kind of track on an album. The morale and lyrics are ones that mean a good deal to me, as I worked away on my own music so many people had told me I could never do anything with it.
I plan on surprising them all one day.
Very good pristine recording of your voices, the background vocalist does a great job as well as the lead singer. I am going to assume that the deeper "neva give up" was a pitch modification. I laughed the first time I heard it because I imagined some big built black guy randomly poke his head into the room and say "neva give up!" and leave.
It's a shame it's so short, I really did enjoy it, this has potential to become a commercial track. The mix of sounds are all perfect!
Easily a 5/5 from me r-17, really well done. I am quite pleased by this track. I'd like to invite you to check my work sometime.
r-17: We're glad you liked it! Both of us will be checking out your tunes soon. This was an inspirational piece made tongue-in-cheek for Electric Mans 8000 (you can find it...somewhere)
Thoams: Yeah, I'm glad you liked it, it was a lot of fun to make, a very different kind of song for us (see Heaviest 8000, ALSO for Electric Mans).
r-17: This was the first time where the lyrics were actually song lyrics for us, and I'm background because I can't sing. You're totally about the 'dude' that just pops in; that's what we were shooting for.
Thoams: Yeah, so like the song embodies, neva give up and keep a smile on your face! Take care!