a bit too solomanic maybe
It seems way to random and unconstructed. At times there are the overdriven high pitched things which countinues to deeper and heavier parts... And it's not following any notes either. You should've had a simple drum loop there to make the guitar follow it.
I doubt solo's are as slow as these, or as overdriven as these.
Or maybe you should get some software and layer/ make it a compelte track.
(Norge ftw ^^)