This is insane, sounding. The juxtaposition between the almost cheerfully sorrow hook and the gritty grime verses is so interesting here. Lyrics on point. Loving the general delivery and vocal projection; very dynamic and exciting. Flow was good; although it seemed to falter a bit near the end of the verse; that combined with the "to make them, oh jesus, uh" line sounded more like it was read, rather than possessing a more conversational/'theatrical tone to it (which you display throughout this song already), maybe with a more sassy or emphasized "UH?" it would communicate the intentional meaning more clearly.
Dope track overall, wasnt feeling the beat at first, but it's grown on me. Both your voice and this beat go well together.
To start, I absolutely MUST tell you that I had to look up the definition of Juxtaposition and I'm impressed with your usage of that word. Rappers' vocabulary never ceases to amaze me.
I want to thank you for your incredibly in-depth review. I don't get them as often as I used to, and they really do wonders to shed light on what I'm doing right as well as what I can improve. Really, thank you, man.
Noice :3 Using a Gerbo track as a trap beat :p ~S~
Is this trap? I dunno, man. Legitimately, lol. I just write based on what feels right. I'm glad you enjoyed it, Mr. Skiddle! :D
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