Needs Some Work
This isn't one of your better versions of God Is A Girl. I have to say I'm not a big fan of the "Are You Ready"'s the robot voice says, but I do like the "God Is A Girl" thrown in there. The song seems a bit repetitive, and :55-1:59 would make a much better beginning to the song. Your strengths are the solid beats the drums provide, like in 3:12-3:37. Add more of that in there, and this song should come together a lot better.
You didn't flub up the song as a whole. You have good pieces. I just think it should be reworked a bit.
this indeed was a good song as nate was saying and for the record... dj nate is one of my favorite artists... if you wanna hear some good grand great songs listen to B0unc3. one of the best and then nate congrats you get my 10 and 5
I like your use of synths. I may seem like I'm being critical, but for your first review, I'm gonna try to help you improve.
1. The snare seemed very cheap and unrealistic.. Maybe work on that.
2. Nice synths.
3. Seems empty in parts. Don't be afraid to cram more melodies and synths in there.
4. That robotic FL voice HAS to go. Although it may fit in other songs, it doesn't fit in this one.
5. VERY nice pads.
Thats about it. Hope I didn't seem to harsh or critical. Just trying to help ya out.
Check my stuff?
Good luck, and maybe talk to you later.
Thanks for this little Help ;-)
But do you want to say about the snare. Don't know how you meant it...
:-) If you want to know, I downloaded some of your Songs. Best ones were High Volume and Always here 2 Demo again... Remixed it a bit... If you want it I can give it to you! See ya
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.