Nice track, maybe first part is a bit too long, and a faster development would've sounded better, but that's just my taste. Anyway, it's a great work!
Thank you for your review
Great track, small tip:
Be careful as a musician with descriptions on your songs that advance any sort of political cause. It may be a widely supported one, but if you want to grow as a musician, it's best to appear as neutral as possible. This doesn't mean you need to actually be neutral, obviously you're allowed to show your own thoughts. But an easy way to lose or not gain fans is to agree with or argue against certain causes, as it will offend some people. A great way to prevent that is just to appear neutral.
Great track though, 5/5 :)
like i give a fuck about what my description offended special snowflakes. as mentioned many times before, i'm not competitive. i could write music better than many mainstream musicians, and i have actual history of award winning projects. i do music for the sake of entertainment of other and myself, and not for profit.
music is to express one self, not selling yourself. if i can't have fun, then i don't want to make music.
Music should transcend politics just as much as it transcends borders...excellent execution though.
Was it politic that the Spanish commit genocide against the Natives? Was it politic that US committed ethnic cleansing against the African slaves? Was it politic that Iraq was invaded and 100,000 perished?
If lives were determined by politics and statistics then I rather have all politicians and leaders set on the guillotine like King Louis did.
This is a great description, and it effectively draws me in. The song evokes a sense of mournfulness, yet it's still fairly busy, which symbolizes the military aggression. You're really good at enhancing the mood of your tracks with vocals, and I like the variety of instruments! This is a very meaningful and deep track.
Thank you for your review, BlueOceans. :)
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