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ERA'S ISLAND- MARIO AND YOSHI TRIBUTE

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speciall song to yoshi and mario. felt like celebrating their franshise with a song of my own
its an update to the last version..
please comment your thoughts thank you.

will finish song soon
i would love to see a geometry dash level with this song it would be dope=)

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I like the sample at the beginning, but I think it faded out a little too quickly for its own good. This is really picky, but cutting it off instead of letting the reverb finish the work of dispersing the sound made it feel restricted instead of cathartic. I wasn’t a huge fan of your bass instrument, either. I think it has a bit too much treble and attack, whereas a smoother sound would better complement the mood of the piece. The progression isn’t bad, but the piece is pretty minimalistic throughout. Instead of letting reverb fill out the texture for you, I’d suggest layering more harmonies or chords onto it. The melodic content here is tasteful, though - I especially like the melody at 1:44. After a while, the piece gets pretty repetitive, and I would’ve liked to see you vary the main melody and other riffs towards the end at the very least. The ending also cuts off suddenly, as if you intended to loop it. Overall, it’s a cute and blissful piece that’s a little lack-luster on the composition side. I’d encourage you to work on giving your tracks a little more shape by including more dynamic contrast, phrasing, or filtering. Keep at it, LLCALIREP. :)

6.25/10


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Thank you :) will take your advice


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Thanks bro. I appreciate it:)

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LLCALIREP
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Uploaded
Apr 6, 2017
10:19 PM EDT
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4.3 MB
3 min 9 sec
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