were the crackles at the beginning intended? otherwise pretty catchy
They weren't intended at first, but I kinda liked them and I didn't kniw hiw to fix them anyways, so I left them there. Thank you :3
ok, so the first part i thought was great, it had a good melody and a good note rise kinda thingy, but then i didnt like the transition that much at all. The take on a happy song was great but ehh. And then the drums kinda felt a little loud and out of place, more like a louder clap, which i also didnt really think fit in. The piano in the backround was fitting imo, since in added a dynamic feeling. At around 1:35 it got super quiet and i can try to understand why. As the song progresses it gets louder. My problem with that is that it is increasing too fast. Also from 1:35 to the end i thought it was repetitive. I mean, yes it is the main melody but to end it off i would just let go of the clap. It was really annoying ;-;.
All in all, this deserves a 4.5/5 nice job.
Keep It Up, disregarding my total jerk review :P
Very nice. Drums feel a bit awkward for some parts of this song. Overall, it's got a very smooth sound. I feel like a secondary melody would be pretty nice throughout the song. During the ending melody, before it gets slightly louder again, it would've probably sounded nice with some extra reverb. The ending feels a bit plastered on, but is ok.
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