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Author Comments

Deep stuff. Made this a long time ago. Might be one of my first ones. Reveiw please.


For a first this is good, man.

I need to learn how to make good hip-hop beats.
Like it, good job.

Wow, this was good.

I have to say the lyrics where nice, rythem was nice keep my head bobbing. The words you say flowed reay well. keep up the good work


Wow. Just wow. Great Flow, great MC voice. I'm stunned. Only beef is that your voice is too loud over the beat. This is amazing though.

Birds-Fly-By responds:

Thanks for the reveiw, yeah I have to work on levels of my vocals, I can never tell, till I post it and you guys mention something to me. I'll try to work on that though thanks! Thanks for the support!


Beat's fun to listen to, but it's used in most of the songs I listen to.
However, the actual rap is interesting, because it seems you're trying to whisper it all out.
I like this.

Birds-Fly-By responds:

Thanks for the reveiw. Again I do understand your thoughts on the beat. And I listened to the track again and it does seem like I'm whispering a little. I really wasnt though, but I guess it turned out ok so whatever. Thanks for the support!

Pleasantly Suprised

It's really refreshing to finally hear an MC rapping about something more than shallow gun culture. Not to mention doing a damn good job at it, too. The beat's a bit cliche for my tastes, but that has nothing to do with your skills, so... great job. I'll definitely be watching you.

Birds-Fly-By responds:

I completely agree with your reveiw. Including your thoughts on the beat. It was like every other beat you hear. Thanks for the support!

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Credits & Info

3.83 / 5.00

Feb 6, 2007
11:57 PM EST
Hip Hop - Modern
File Info
3 MB
3 min 19 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.