the lower part of the melody of the beat is kinda ugly, i think the delay on it kinda jumbles the sound too, bass hits hard as well as the percussion pairing well with it very nicely, voice sounds good too, lyrics as well fit along. Guess if you're gonna make an 2 bar intro with nothing but a single synth, try to give it more space too. Liked it a ton after the vocals and bass came in, solid stuff.
thanks my dude. your feedback helps a ton.
The beat is pretty weak imo, but the vocals are pretty good. I'm pretty sure it's the melody that makes the beat suck, maybe read up on some music theory could help.
thanks for the feedback man, I understand where you're coming from. I've been working on music theory recently, but I'm still working on it. Thank you for taking the time to listen to my songoli though. I appreciate it.
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