lol funny song

i liked the melody itself, but the implentation of the idea was a bit.. unbalanced and repetitive
good points :
*this song is very calm except some points and i like it :)
*the idea of the melody was very good but the only lack is constructing the music based on that idea.
bad points :
*near the end its beginning to mess up, and the volume changes to be too high
*few instruments sound very bad in high velocities, like an annoying horn
*in 00:41 seconds you could've change the whole music to a higher tone and contiune the melody from there - that would be much more nicer than what you did, which means cutting the song and bring it to a lower tone.

another point : in your other songs you sing and it kinda.. broke up your songs because its not a good idea to sing unless you have a voice of a singer

hmm ^_^

I loved the way you made the music box... included with the small bell things, and the way you put a sine into it and nearly made it sound like a square.

I loved the melody you were suppposed to play, but isn't it totally off-beat? it seems skippy and jumpy.

Either way it's a nice little track ^^

Nice

This is a fun little track eh? Very interesting instrument choice.

The high bells and low tones were nice. The solo synth was good as well.The melody was interesting too. Kind of had an ocean, underwater sound to it.

Well, I think some of the velocities on the instruments were really screwy. Extremely loud at one point and hard to hear at another point.

The main synth lead could have used a little release, so it will flow smoother. Around the ending it seemed to get a bit disorganized. With the bass going one way and other instruments going a different way. Smooth it out like the beginning and it will be a lot better.

I dug this track keep worknig on 'em.

-SineRider