Hmrh...

Well I can see what you were trying to accomplish with this track.

I think the different melodies were good, but could have used better instrumentations. The bass was a really terrible tone. It wasn't bassy enough and the frequencies were too low and gave it a bad sound.

The drums were nice throughout but could be mastered a bit better. The whisting lead was a cool sound, but seemed out of place.

Try building on this, fix up some instruments and you might have something nice.

-SineRider

Heh

I would loved if you could only choose a melody, if you know what I mean ;(