not bad :)
Nice! However, the first drop is rather dry, and both drops are quite repetitive. I like the piano!
I like the overall feel of this piece, even though, in my opinion, the title does not suit the 'mood' of the overall song.
The intro is very nice, I like the use of the lead, it almost created a 'wobble' effect (At least in my opinion), however it sounded a bit hollow, and I think it needed a bit of oomph to it to properly get the sound through.
The snare at 0:39 was introduced extremely quickly and I feel like it did not fit the intro at all; it was far too powerful and the into did not reflect it. This would probably be fixed if you made the lead a bit more powerful.
There was no proper tension for when the drop was going to hit - It was literally an intro, an introduced snare and then the drop. I did not feel completely satisfied when the drop hit because there was not enough tension for it.
The introduction of the synth at 1:12 was my first real glimpse into what the title suggested, and I think that this synth was my favourite part of this song. It made the song almost sound complete with it, and it made a great addition to the initial drop. Unfortunately, all I could hear was that synth and the drum, there was no bass present and you removed the 'wobble' synth present at the start of the drop. That is what made this part much worse for me. The presence of some 'background', even in the form of a varied synth, would have greatly improved the atmosphere.
The piano in the outro was nice, but the drum that was introduced during it was not at all a resemblance to the one used throughout the bulk of the song. Although the piano and drum sounded very nice together, I feel like they did not fit the theme.
The gradual fade was a nice touch.
PS. Please be hesitant with me, I'm quite new to writing reviews. I'm sorry if this was a bit critical, but these are the points that I feel stood out most to me.
Im not an expert producer, and dont have THAT good plugins, but i still try to make a ''good'' song with all i have. Im still trying to learn how many FL Plugins work though. But you are right. Thanks for the review :)
Not bad, I think.
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