I like the sound of the synths you used. There's a nice balance in the mix, each part comes in clearly, and there are no harsh tones.
If this is just a demo, like a prototype, I am interested to see how you manage to use the new instrumentation to smooth out the transitions. Guitars and drums will definitely give this a completely different feeling. The transition at 0:39 is very abrupt and jarring. This could be fixed with clever instrumentation, though. Plus, the loop from the end to the beginning is abrupt as well. While it matches in intensity, the rhythms supporting the melodies are strikingly different. That said, I really like the growing intensity throughout the entirety of the song.
Are you planning on using acoustic guitars, clean electric guitars, overdriven guitars, some combination of those? I am very curious.
Even though it is a rough sketch for a loop with great melodies and supportive rhythms, but I would recommend working on the transitions. Looping music needs to have smooth transitions, otherwise it is constantly slapping the listener to get their attention. However, that all depends on what the music is made for.
Great demo! Keep at it! I want to hear the final product and how you envisioned it!
im actually creating a full song and im gonna play the song live with my guitar i play electric guitar thats how i came up with the ideas i played them first then put them into the computer. im no drum expert but i used a basic beat to keep time in the changed time signature
i just loop it when its not finished
and i shall work on la transitions thats some thing i have trouble programing into a computer
thank you i really appreciate all the feedback
thank you bren gn
I liked the first 39 seconds, was expecting some kind of breakbeat to come in. I thought the rest was a little boring, I didn't think the drums went well with what you had, but this is a nice stepping stone. Nice experimental stuff tho, good luck!
its just a demo and is ment to be played on guitar the drums keep track of the change in time signature just for now the song will be hyped when its done dont worry <_<
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