it's an EPIC WIN!
This is a really good track dude/dudette maybe just add a general baseline and you win good fuckin work.
on the right track
good attempt. you've got some good ideas and the melody is good. The gated synth part matches it well. The thing you need to work on is the drums. Techno needs a really consistent beat, you give it to us sometimes, but only sometimes! The standard 4 kick per bar techno pattern is essential to get people nodding their head along to your track. And get a cool clap or snare on the offbeat and then some hats.
And then another important thing is the bassline. The low frequencies are really important in techno. You need a bass in your techno man!
Then the track will rock a bit more.
And I'm not too sure what the noise in the background is that comes in during the second half, its a bit distracting!
oh yeah huh. thats a good idea. thanks man that helps a lot. and the noise in the backround that comes around in the middle of the song was suppose to be waves but it came out wierd. thank you for your help.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.