I'd like it, if only I could hear it clearly.
Don't get me wrong, it's pretty good. I like the Electro-DnB mix you have going there. But it's really quiet. With my headphones I can keep the volume down at 8-20ish area and hear everything on my computer clearly. But with this song I had to crank my volume up to 70- and even then it was kind of quiet. I checked in with the soundcloud version and it was louder. However, this might just be a newgrounds issue, as I checked in with another song and it was just as quiet.
As for actual review, it feels a bit repetitive, with the two verses of the stuttering guy sounding pretty much the same. And then at the end I feel you got a bit lazy and used a different instrument (or sample? Idk) to play the same rhythm. (okay scratch that, I gave it another listen and it's quite different, but it's still a little disappointing that you waited until the end to change it up). Other than that I only have a few nitpicky remarks, like how long the first verse is (a full minute!), and without those, it's good.