Not bad dude, your audio quality wassnt too bad, if i could say i would suggest a better microphone. On top of that you vocal range is a little stiff, mayhaps try some vocal warmups and look up videos on becoming a voice actor.
Good luck and keep up the great work
Thank you kindly. I'll see what I can do.
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