Improve: I sounds like a techno, but at some places theres like only drums, that kind of ruins the hole feel of it.
For your first song this is pretty good. I like the arrangements of the drums, just dont like the drums themselves, Fl presets are bad unless you absolutely fill them with reverbs and stuff.
I like the piano too, gave a nice feel to the song. You should remake this, and have more of a beat going through the song to make it more exciting, cause i could imagine this getting exciting, but it never happend DX. Nice job, especially for your first song.
thanks you. i originally came up with the main melody on guitar and made this song out of it. so some day i'll try to remake it better. thanks for your comment