I like the mood at the beginning. It certainly seems like it’s leading up to something...almost reminds me of the little riffs a broadway composer puts in to foreshadow the start of a number after a section of dialogue. The transition at :23 is cool, and I like the melodic content thereafter. The synths mesh well together, even if that lead was a bit generic. The loop is smooth, but I don’t really consider this a structurally complete piece. Production-wise, I thought the drums could’ve been a lot stronger, especially the snare. Some more careful equalizing would really help you out there. You don’t do much with drums in this piece, either, but that’s probably because this piece only really has one cycle of intro-chorus-postchorus. Flesh this piece out more, and you could make a lot out of it. As it is now, it doesn’t really satisfy my needs compositionally, but I do think you have a great sense of melody and harmony. Keep at it, man!