Overall an exellent piece. Very melodious and counterpunctual at sometimes. I liked what you did with the filtering and panning. My only suggestion is to bring up the volume of the synth playing the melody a little bit; other than that great job! Keep making music :)
- Professor Admiral Bacon
a very good meldoy in this, though I didn't think a piano did good in that place. But well, I don't think anything else would fit that pianoic melody
Dude you got me think of something I played in first grade at primary school, some stupid math thing where you earn candy in a platform for solving math puzzles... but the graphics were childish and funny so it's a kinda good memory... lolz ^^
But, the thing you put in which you modulated away after a while... it was a bit... unnecessary... it kinda overflow the song a bit.
Everythink else was great, there's nothing wrong with any clarity, the diversity is great, I haven't heard anything similar and you seem to have put tonsa effort in it.
good observations man, I'll try and make good use of them ;)
Thanks for the review.
It sounds pretty good! But this may just be me, but I think the first melody you have goes a little too long with no real big change. Just a small complaint from me. Also, The second real melody that comes in (yknow that synth) I dont feel it, I donno, doesn't fit the song in the right way. The song was really well done, but those two things are all i have against it... Nice beat, and such XD Good job
thanks. I agree about the second synth, your right.
Strange no-one mentioned the main build and the climax, which is the key feature of the track.
Good-sounding... I like it. =)
Thanks for reviewing my song... I'll review a few of yours.
You know, I really need to listen to more of your songs... this is something I'd expect to find on my iPod or something. Yeah, it's that good - I'm not trying to butter you up or anything. Seriously. =P
Your melody's catchy, your mixing's done well, and your percussion fits, for one. You build things up nicely - that bass you introduce in the beginning of the song's nice, too. You keep the percussion fresh - you just introduced some hihats, which add a lot to the song. And now you've added a synth which I assume is the melody.
The song's nice through... hey, I see a nice high-pitched synth fading in. It's getting better and better.
Eeewww... you know, it may be something you thought to be a good idea, but what you do with that one sound effect and the panning just gives me a headache... and it brings all the other sounds down, too, which generally isn't something very pleasant.
Past that, it's an overall great song. I like this a lot... you've got a 5/5 from me. Go ahead and PM me whenever you want me to review a song of yours. =)
hehe..well IT doesnt bring the other things down..its a low pass filter with panning. :)
Glad you liked it, thanks for the review.
Hehe pretty nice!! Yeah I'm starting but im trying my best. You're a pro compared to me. The beat, the melody, everything's in harmony. Just perfect. Why don't you hear my Wonder City Remix and give it a review? I think it's my best shot until now. Thanks for the positive comments =) ill keep trying.
thanks man, glad you liked it.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.