I liked it.
I thought it was pretty good.I actually like the guitar being a little detuned because it gives you that intimidation Sephiroth would give you.Turn it down just one knotch and it's perfect.
nice job on song but couldve been bettr good try
The guitar you used for the background was a little too overpowering compared to the rest of the parts playing you, should try turning it down about 4 clicks and add a slight reeverb to it to put it more in the back. The one you used for the melody was fairly detuned and it would probable be better to go with a different lead try using more of a bell like lead like a piano or make your own from 3xosxc. I am not trying to bash your stuff only write a helpful review. I have been around music makers for a while and if you want I could collab or show you some skills you could use in your songs just send my a Pm.
ill work on it