this track went nowhere. it was the same kinda backround arp stuff over and over and over again. there definitely needs to be a change in bass progression. the percussions alright but thats about it.
Good - and a few suggestions, if you don't mind.
It sounds pretty good... and when you introduce your first melody, it sounds pretty good.
Reverse cymbal... and you bring the melody in again.
You just introduced a hat... this song is beginning to sound better.
Ooh, I'm beginning to notice high energy levels in this, which is good. You build things up quite nicely.
You know, this song is great, but it all sounds like one big buildup to something even bigger and better. I'm thinking you could somehow condense the essence of this song into a buildup (you could just build things up a lot faster) for a powerful, crazy, freeform, high energy song. Try it sometime. (I'm actually about to submit something - a few days away, actually =P - that's the perfect example of what I'm talking about... should I PM you so you can see what I'm talking about?)
My only other advice is to work on that hat of yours which you introduce towards the beginning of the song. (It sounds a bit overused.) Other than that, great job on this song. Keep going. =)
Lastly: why don't you stop by my audio page sometime? Review a song or two, maybe. =P I'd like it.
That was cool.
Very cool. I like the techno sounding audio the best, this was one of them.
The instruments you used were pretty sweet, too.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.