ehhh... its ok]
lol... those squeaks sounded like farts, and it was really distracting from some of the other stuff in the song.
yeah i didnt think was very good at all. but its ok for someone just starting out. there were many random things in there, it reminded me of an industrail type song with lots of potential! but it just lacked structure. perhaps a few riffs could help out this a lot.
anyways, ok song, keep trying. techno is a very broad style of music, you could fiddle around with stuff in there and it might help you out with the hip hop modern stuff... just a suggestion.
look at my stuff when the mood strikes you. ill check back here later.
-mawkeetus speaking from the bmc-audio account
thank you for your review, i consider it a compliment, i'm still learning the basics, and therefor i'm happy people like you give me some advice, i will definetly be experimenting alot to find my own style.
Well it sounded a little wierd, sorry.
thank you for leaving a comment, i know some things are pretty weird, hope to get better, thank you for your time =)