Question: is your Fruity Limiter on in the Master channel?
If it is, you should turn it off, as it is cutting away your true potential.
If it isn't, you should turn down the compression or distortion down a bit. It's kind of hard to concentrate on what I can hear with unnecessary noise and clutter.
But overall, this song sounds good! Keep up the good work, m8 o.-
Yes it is, and I didn't turn it off for a reason... Last time I turned Fruity Limiter off I got this: http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/693189
So I don't see how turning it off would be beneficial...
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