Hmmm. Fairly decent.
For one, the buildup's too slow - after 8 measures, the only thing you add is a clap, and then you add a little bit of percussion. The notes you introduce with the harmony synth is waaay cliched, too.
You do well with harmonies... often I find myself telling people they don't have enough. You do well there, you have the right amount. Keep it there. You change things up now and then, which is good... though you could do it a bit more often. ;)
Ooh, you're bringing in some nice synths now. And now everything just got quiet... don't do that unless you really know how. And you do - you introduced the drums again decently, and then that other synth... this is fairly decent. You did a nice job with this. Keep going. =)
Why don't you review my stuff sometime? If you were to review Phantom Zero, the latest version of Dark Storms at Sea, or And So This Story Goes (or any combination of the three >=) ) it would be nice. =P
I agree somewhat..the build-up is slow..and if you listen to my other songs..you know that's not my style..I just figure that I'd try something different..I listened to a couple professional DJs and noticed they had extremely long build-ups..longer than I did..but different people have different tastes and opinions and I'm perfectly cool with that. I appreciate your review and I really enjoyed your song..I'm gonna go back and DL it and give it a 5/5 as well.
this one seems sort of empty? its pretty repetitive...the clap is pretty cheap too. i liked it when you switched it up though, all the fade ins, but you shoud have shortened the intro. overall good song, i gave it a 5/5 and a download. chck out my page too plz
It's pretty much the only clap I have..thanks for giving it a 5/5 though..peace!