We're grateful to 53xy83457, our latest supporter!

We're 12 people from our target today. Why don't you be one of them?

You can support NG too and get tons of perks for just $2.99.

Create a Free Account and then..

Become a Supporter!


Download this song!

Author Comments

Hey y'all! I wrote this rough idea tonight and thought I'd upload it! I'm really digging what I got going on so far. Really looking forward to finishing it and maybe adding vocals...but I dunno. We'll see. Hope y'all dig what I got so far!


edit: I wrote an ending for it and reuploaded it!

Edit of an edit: Woah, did'nt know I was on the front page haha thanks!


Holy shit dude, this is so fucking heavy! That tone is so god damn amazing!

Metaljonus responds:

Thanks bro!

Did I show you mah titties for this one?

( * ) ( * )

Metaljonus responds:

So hawt :O8=====D*****

It is cool! ^_^

Metaljonus responds:

Thanks! :)

Great playing and riffs, I dig the complex composition.
Watch your master - some clipping going on I noticed. Other than that it's a solid mix, obviously could be touched up but hey NOBODY'S PERFECT
Good stuff

Metaljonus responds:

Thanks dude! And ya the mix was rushed and I have'nt gotten back to mixing it again. I'll probably redo the bass and some other parts. Thanks for listening!

Playing is superb. Mixing is a bit weak in places. The spacy atmospheric synths are sticking out until you get to about 57 seconds.

Writing is good. Bass could probably do with being down an octave at points but that could just be my ears. At points, it feels too loud. Others, too soft. Maybe needs a bit more grit to it. Of course, the djenting is very aggressive, panned well -- I feel there could be just a bit more aggressive distortion on the rhythm, perhaps EQ.

Your leads could probably come up a bit more in the mix and do well. Drums, particularly snare, need more grit and presence.

Overall, good work. Excited to hear the finished product!

Metaljonus responds:

Thanks! Glad ya dig it! :)

Click on an icon to vote on this!

Credits & Info


4.22 / 5.00

Feb 26, 2017
4:56 AM EST
Heavy Metal
File Info
13 MB
5 min 41 sec

Licensing Terms

You are free to copy, distribute and transmit this work under the following conditions:

You must give credit to the artist.
You may not use this work for commercial purposes. *
No Derivative Works:
You may not alter, transform, or build upon this work.

*Please contact me if you would like to use this in a commercial project. We can discuss the details.